Tuesday 26 October 2021

My writing with my Aunty

 On a full moon night The clouds started to walk, not any not normal walking but moonwalking . The Sky Tower fell over because of the moonwalking clouds though It isn't normal. It's only happening for two reasons: 1 it's Halloween and two the zombie cheerleader girl . She has farted her way from  America. This is a very cheap way to travel - Fart Express!



Her nose was yellow and teeth were brown.  Her skin was an ominous green and her eyes were black like crows . ZCG was looking for her long lost brother . She thinks he was captured by a yeti on her arduous quest. She accidentally summoned up which it was meant to help her but instead Made life harder with moonwalking clouds causing destruction.




The witch found zombie cheerleader girl while visiting the Sky Tower.She grabbed her and cooked her up in a stew with mint and coriander. The Witch and her three legged three-headed dog had a lovely lunch that day.


3 comments:

  1. Morena oliver, thank you for sharing your creative writing about the moonwalking clouds and the zombie cheerleader girl. You introductory sentence is great, it made me laugh. well done for adding lots of adjectives to describe the zombie cheerleader girl, they helped to paint an image in my mind. YOu ending was not what I expected, but I enjoyed that it wasn't a happy ending (well not for ZCG, I am sure the witch and dog enjoyed themselves), especially as it is based around Halloween. Where did you get the interesting ideas for your story from?

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    1. We picked random ideas written on paper and had to include them in our story.

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  2. Kia ora Oliver, thank you for sharing your writing with us. I agree with your teacher, that was a very unexpected ending! I look forward to seeing more of your work online.

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