Kia Ora Oliver Great work on your haiku poem, it really creates a picture in my mind. Have you tried reading it aloud to check the number of syllables?
Kia ora Oliver, thank you for sharing your poem with us. I can see you have thought carefully about what words to use. I particularly like: "lava oozing" and "chasing terrified people" - I can just imagine this happening! Kia pai tō rā. (Have a good day.)
Kia ora Oliver, thank you for sharing your haiku poem about an eruption on your blog. I really like the verbs you have used. Using the clues in your poem, I think that it is a dry eruption/scoria cone. Am I right?
Kia Ora Oliver
ReplyDeleteGreat work on your haiku poem, it really creates a picture in my mind. Have you tried reading it aloud to check the number of syllables?
Kia ora Oliver, thank you for sharing your poem with us. I can see you have thought carefully about what words to use. I particularly like: "lava oozing" and "chasing terrified people" - I can just imagine this happening!
ReplyDeleteKia pai tō rā. (Have a good day.)
Kia ora Oliver, thank you for sharing your haiku poem about an eruption on your blog. I really like the verbs you have used. Using the clues in your poem, I think that it is a dry eruption/scoria cone. Am I right?
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