One dark gloomy night, inside a polished stoney cave there lived a lesser short-tailed bat named Binky.
Binky was at hunting looking for insects and fruit.He spotted an orange and flew over. Little did he know a predator Mr Rapper the rat was hiding behind the fruit ready to pounce on his prey.
Just as he was about to land on the fruit his ecolocation high squeak warned him that there was a rat.
He sped off back to his cave feeling hungry but safe.
The message in the story is squeak before you eat.
Hi Oliver.
ReplyDeleteI really like your story because it tells me a lot about Binky and that you have a really interesting sentence starter "One dark gloomy night."
I love using that sentence starter too.
What do you think you could add to the story?
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