Hey Oliver. I really like your blog post. Slide 3, 4, and 5 is very clear to read so as the title. But maybe next time you could add color to your slides so it doesn't look plain and add images on slide 2 so people know what a cinder cone volcano is, what a composite volcano, shield volcano, and a lava dome volcano is. And next time you could make the writing on slide 2 bigger. Also next time, you could describe what those volcanoes are with some writing. But I really like your work you have done 😃. Did you learn anything about what a shield volcano is? And what was it that you've learnt. Blog you later! Stay home and stay safe 😷👍. - LAVINA 🤪
Morena Oliver, thank you for sharing your learning on your blog. I see that you think shield volcanoes are the best type of volcano. Do you think that perhaps you could explain why you think that? On slide 5 you have included a picture of Mount Edziza, where is this volcano?
Kia ora Oliver, thank you for sharing your mahi (work) with us. I enjoyed looking at your slides. The information in the table on Slide 3 is clear and easy to read - tino pai! Here's an interesting fact I found online at National Geographic Kids: The word “volcano” comes from the Roman name “Vulcan” - he was the Roman god of fire!
Hey Oliver. I really like your blog post. Slide 3, 4, and 5 is very clear to read so as the title. But maybe next time you could add color to your slides so it doesn't look plain and add images on slide 2 so people know what a cinder cone volcano is, what a composite volcano, shield volcano, and a lava dome volcano is. And next time you could make the writing on slide 2 bigger. Also next time, you could describe what those volcanoes are with some writing. But I really like your work you have done 😃. Did you learn anything about what a shield volcano is? And what was it that you've learnt. Blog you later! Stay home and stay safe 😷👍.
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Morena Oliver, thank you for sharing your learning on your blog. I see that you think shield volcanoes are the best type of volcano. Do you think that perhaps you could explain why you think that? On slide 5 you have included a picture of Mount Edziza, where is this volcano?
ReplyDeleteKia ora Oliver, thank you for sharing your mahi (work) with us. I enjoyed looking at your slides. The information in the table on Slide 3 is clear and easy to read - tino pai! Here's an interesting fact I found online at National Geographic Kids: The word “volcano” comes from the Roman name “Vulcan” - he was the Roman god of fire!
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